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Post by FairyTaleArista on Jun 26, 2015 15:34:26 GMT -6
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Post by hannahmr14 on Jun 26, 2015 15:40:01 GMT -6
Ekk I loved Captivated it was so sweet! But I still am like ahhhhh a like 83 year old marrying a 20 year old but he is an elf so that makes it better I loved how Makilien and Eldir teased him:)
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Post by FairyTaleArista on Jun 26, 2015 15:46:37 GMT -6
Eh, not as weird as Aedon and Vonawyn, because the guy is supposed to be the one older. They're adorable.
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Post by hannahmr14 on Jun 26, 2015 18:05:45 GMT -6
True Yes I loved the whole book I read it twice in like two hours:) the only thing I didn't like was that it was short I've been plotting that Makilien and Kyrin are cousins:) ( even though that's just my random thoughts\hopes )
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Post by FairyTaleArista on Jun 26, 2015 19:40:32 GMT -6
Ilyon and Dolennar are two very different worlds, though ... not likely.
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Post by hannahmr14 on Jun 26, 2015 19:46:56 GMT -6
* wistfully* I can still dream (that reminds me of a song *starts singing I've got a dream* yeah I know but yet if you ever watched frozen Repunzel and Elsa and Anna are cousins and they live in two very different country's:) (yeah I know it's not at all likely)
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Post by FairyTaleArista on Jun 26, 2015 20:00:47 GMT -6
But at least Corona and Arendelle are small enough to exist in the same world. Iyon and Dolennar, not so much.
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Post by hannahmr14 on Jun 26, 2015 20:03:12 GMT -6
Yeah but i still love the idea:)
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Post by FairyTaleArista on Jun 26, 2015 21:07:37 GMT -6
On another not Captivated is an adorable story.
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Post by hannahmr14 on Jun 26, 2015 21:13:20 GMT -6
Fan fiction you mean? Where do you guys write fan fiction?
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Post by ninjaserena on Aug 26, 2015 11:21:34 GMT -6
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Post by Brie D on Nov 4, 2015 16:20:51 GMT -6
Just read this yesterday. I loved it. Wish it was longer. I bought it as the reward for meeting my writing goal last month.
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Post by rayray on Nov 11, 2015 7:19:53 GMT -6
I thought that it was weird, the age thing, but it was really cute!
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Post by Brie D on Nov 11, 2015 13:53:52 GMT -6
Yeah that was slightly weird. It's a good example of plot structure in a short story. It has call to action, the ignoring the need, and finally being forced to take action.
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Post by bourdongirl on Dec 4, 2015 20:35:11 GMT -6
It was sooo sweet!!! *franticly stumbling for the next part*
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Post by toni on Aug 22, 2017 12:42:54 GMT -6
I wish it were longer!!!♥♥♥ Loved it though!!!
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